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contemplating you
turns into an ugly speculation
it is disgusting allowing this argumentitive anger
to seethe and release a memory of sickness and teasing health
with remorse crumbling off
falling over void eyes
having the impudent feature of the whole situation
leaving my mouth ajar
before i could not travel far without wondering what you would think
now it is a crime

jaded i am retreating
to allow something new to commence
we could not be impartial
but i cannot accuse you
we are all looking for the same thing
©2008-2009 ~ourXtragicXscene
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It might not make much sense. I decided to get rid of grammar. Just to make it plain as a truth would be.

I'm not sure what i was looking to get out of this.....

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It's confusing, but intriguing. I get a sense of what's going on, but i'm completely puzzled at the same time X) I'm really starting to wonder what it's all about, I read it through twice even :P


Nice job <3
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i understood it i think, weel i didnt get confused lol. wowo the words give a strong impression. yeah i like it

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Thanks. Glad you weren't confused.

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If i didn't know what was going on i'd be confused. I need to practice on making some parts obvious. It's really just about an on going argument that i have with someone to do with God/existence etc. nd how i used to and should deal with the kind of things we both say. Hope that makes sense.....^^;

And thankyou. =]


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